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Amadeusz! This one felt soft and serious.

I especially like this sanza:

Whatever motif I wish to write,

I wait,

so this song will not tear

the soft strings apart.

What a clever way to say, well, what I got from it, that trying to make a moment beautiful with words has the devastating effect of tarnishing it instead. The writing dilemma, do I record or do I experience? Great job.

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